Thursday, September 04, 2008

More Wet Than Water?

“She crashed into my life as she wandered into my day.
Like some sin tipped bullet slamming into my head.
Dream colored eyes, Soul stealing lips.
Her light touch, casual, as she reached across my lap
Made every other woman vanish from my memory
From my heart.
I knew that I was gonna end, somehow. Soon, but happy.
And, her legs! These legs-”

The bartender didn’t really care.  
Thought the story might have got dirty
But it didn’t. Just turning simple.
He knew the Dancer the drunk was reminiscing about.
They all did, down by the Sea.

“-there was once, only once, when she let me have her.
Sort of.  
I’ll never get that scent of her, up close, out of my mind.
Pure pleasure.  
Like god mixed whiskey and pussy together.
You cant understand how that stays with you.
Ruling everyday of your life….”

This guy was almost done. The end of the story was always the same.
With them all.
A sadness and a deep need
That will never go away.
And one they will treasure for all time.
The bartender poured him one on the house.


Anonymous Anonymous said...

Man, I am totally channeling Sin City for this one! I love it!

September 4, 2008 at 8:07 PM  
Blogger The Mad Celt said...

"Like god mixed whiskey and pussy together." fucking guy, you.

September 4, 2008 at 8:52 PM  
Blogger ~Jobthingy~ said...

"Like god mixed whiskey and pussy together."

i love it

September 4, 2008 at 9:03 PM  
Blogger Jimmy said...

u must be crazier than u look

if u believe guys read what u rite

September 4, 2008 at 9:47 PM  
Blogger Jimmy said...

u dont fool me babe

when it is so rounded
and it doesnt sag a bit

it is synthetic

September 4, 2008 at 9:55 PM  
Blogger Rage said...

O beautiful woman, how I hate you so
As you possess the titties
that I want
you stank ho

September 4, 2008 at 10:45 PM  
Blogger ozymandiaz said...

hell, i could use a drink after that
must say, though, that I love having my "soul stolen"

September 5, 2008 at 8:05 AM  
Anonymous Brendan said...

Booze and pussy, the dark god's censer and altar ... loved it. Poetry of this stuff is old, vital and wild ... Great job.

September 5, 2008 at 8:35 AM  
Blogger Scribblers Inc said...


Scribblers Inc.

September 5, 2008 at 9:16 AM  
Blogger It's all in my head.... hopefully. said...

great writing. whiskey and pussy... fabulous line. excellent post.

September 5, 2008 at 10:20 AM  
Blogger Jimmy said...

September 5, 2008 at 10:55 PM  
Blogger Disturbed Stranger said...

You express yourself quite uniquely ;)

well done!

September 5, 2008 at 11:24 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

mmmmmm, nice

September 8, 2008 at 9:23 AM  

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